In many countries, more and more people choose to buy imported food rather than food produced locally. Why do people buy imported food? What could be done to encourage people to buy local food?
In many parts of the world, it is uncommon to see people enjoying imported food over local ones. While a variety of reasons contribute to this tendency, competent authorities should implement supportive schemes to encourage citizens to eat local food.
Unsurprisingly, people become more obsessed with foreign food these days for a host of reasons, one of which would be that the packaging of international food often is more presentable; hence, it could exhibit appealing and appetizing appearance which might easily lure customers in. Another factor attributed to this trend is the dominance of advertising. Specifically, marketing strategies of food distributors actively cultivate among consumers to take on board the idea that when it comes to quality, imported food are far superior food produced locally. As a result, consumers get planted into their brains the belief that they could get their hand on the best products by purchasing imported products.
Turning to possible solutions, some encouragements must be devised to stimulate the consumption of local products. Firstly, local food manufacturers should assure consumers both the quality and the taste of their products by endeavoring to make it more wholesome. At the same time, should the administrations join hand in the progress by not only imposing scrupulous regulations in terms of securing hygiene but also levying high taxes on overseas comestibles, people will have more incentives to elevate their spending on regionally produced food. Another attempt would be to diversify regional food, eliminating the need to import domestic food. This, hence, would motivate local consumption, which in turn helps to boost the national economy and ensure the sustainability of the local market.
In conclusion, there has been a growing preference for imported food, mainly due to the influence of advertising; therefore, the government is advised to introduce several initiatives to promote consumers’ demand for local food.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, if, so, therefore, while, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1699.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.57049180328 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07931521756 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.626229508197 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 538.2 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 68.0243012133 49.4020404114 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.583333333 106.682146367 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.4166666667 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.16666666667 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.401629948093 0.244688304435 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.141335402617 0.084324248473 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.090246019029 0.0667982634062 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.245697915167 0.151304729494 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0503757187442 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.5 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 29.18 50.2224549098 58% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.32 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.36 8.58950901804 121% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 78.4519038076 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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