In many countries, obesity and unhealthy eating habits are increasing. What are the reasons for this trend? What is the most effective way to prevent it?
Owing to technological advancement, the use of washing machines and vacuum cleaners have been increased day by day. Humanity is getting used to it and this dependency could affect the human king adversely, there are many others who believe it to be a blessing to us. However, this can have a negative impact on us and the next generation.
The development of technology is good but there are many affairs that people have to do by hand. Such as housework is better if done by hand than by machines. But people are addicted to devices. Consequently, they get used to achieving everything efficiently and do not even try to achieve something more difficult. That is the reason why people are so lazy. Laziness is one of the biggest obstacles in the development of every major..Even, lazy workers can cause great harm to their employers.
Another major disadvantage of inactivity is our health. In fact, inactivity leads to excess weight and in the last decades many people suffering from being overweight, moreover, their number is not decreasing regardless of any countermeasures and exercises. Globally, 39% of adults aged 18 years and older were overweight or obese in 2016, and now, in 2023, that statistic increased to 51%.In addition, experts said that the main reason for obesity is inactivity. Inactivity - the effect of technologies, such as dishwashers. So, people should limit to use of some technologies.
In conclusion, we cannot oppose the development of technologies but we can reduce using to them. And, then the indicators of each disease and laziness are greatly reduced.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, however, if, moreover, so, then, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1328.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06870229008 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02135220666 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.645038167939 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 429.3 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 51.2499618902 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.0 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.375 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0985906774831 0.244688304435 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0269434273191 0.084324248473 32% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0340599646432 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0503224612979 0.151304729494 33% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.039338180933 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.83 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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