In many countries, obesity and unhealthy eating habits are increasing. What are the reasons for this trend? What is the most effective way to prevent it ?
Overweight and eating junk foods are growing year by year in many countries. Most people are suffering from obesity and it has become a habit for them to eat unhealthy foods. There are many reasons for this phenomenon and there are different ways to maintain healthy eating habits.
Obesity is generally caused by eating too much and moving too little. If people consume high amounts of energy, particularly fat and sugar, but do not burn off the energy through exercise and physical activity, much of the surplus energy will be stored by the body as fat. So, in every country, every city should have fully free gyms, and then people become interested in participating in it because not everyone spends extra money on gyms on their own.
Furthermore, eating unhealthy food causes other diseases apart from obesity. For instance, high blood pressure, high cholesterol, and diabetes are caused by junk foods. To avoid this, firstly, we should replace unhealthy habits with new, healthy ones. Also, minimize distractions, such as watching the news and shows while eating. Another way is that forums and centers should be established to show everyone the bad results of unhealthy foods and the good benefits of healthy foods. Such as healthy diet protects us against many diseases, diabetes, and cancer.
In conclusion, if people want to be fit and live without any diseases like obesity, they should keep a healthy diet and do more exercise and activities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, so, then, while, apart from, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1218.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 241.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05394190871 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94007293032 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51872346773 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.630705394191 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 381.6 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.2551259062 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.6923076923 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5384615385 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.38461538462 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195185654799 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0763870220462 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0857974860599 0.0667982634062 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121486317175 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.130543070501 0.056905535591 229% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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