In many countries, old or traditional languages are dying out or being forgotten, especially by younger people. Is this an acceptable development which occurs inevitably, or is it something which we should try to prevent?
While several countries have begun forgotten or endangered traditional languages, especially by the young generation. However, the phenomenon is not entirely straightforward, and we can not receive gracefully with this argument, and we have to avoid this activity, which I will elaborate now.
Perhaps the major factor here is the reason why we have to reject with this phenomenon because if in many countries dying out traditional language as the basic language, the society especially the young generation will not know about the culture in those cities. We can see in some regions or nations, such as English in the U.S. or Spanish in Mexico. Their society does not know perfectly about their traditional language, and these languages became extinct when their last speaker dies. Another reason because traditional languages are the connector in the family and local society. people who desire to have good communication in a region have to speak with similar language in the region. For example, the young generation will more familiar with their peers who have a similar language (traditional language)
Turning to possible solutions to avoid this phenomenon is learning a traditional language for children at an early age especially in the home and school. Schools should have the curriculum for the student to study traditional language and provide extracurricular to improve student`s prodigy in a local culture. A second remedy might be applying in the environment, and older people have to introduce with children. finally, students themselves perhaps be more flexible to use one of the cultures in their society which is their basic language.
In summary, there is no reason for being forgotten the basic language, and also we have to conserve from the neighborhood, which creates children know about this language.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: People
...nector in the family and local society. people who desire to have good communication i...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Finally
...people have to introduce with children. finally, students themselves perhaps be more fl...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, however, if, second, so, while, for example, in summary, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1547.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33448275862 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9142337965 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.520689655172 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 495.0 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 0.809619238477 741% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.1600935316 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.916666667 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1666666667 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.58333333333 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223779869755 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0844562666612 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0471781403194 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149101184403 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.012511229417 0.056905535591 22% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.93 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.0 9.78957915832 163% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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