In many countries, people are spending more hours at their workplace. Why is that? Is that a negative and positive development?
Extensions and hectic workschedules for many people in some countries are often prevalent. Dependings on many reasons in order to the statement religiously happens. In my view point, if that main cuprit has been the through the roof, the negative should be outweigh to the positive.
It is becoming common in both developing countries and the others, extremely, individuals who living in middle class or in poverty. So, what is lead to this culprit? For the bajillion explainations, one of them are the concern of cost living nowadays. Each person must try to sacrifice their time in their workplace so as to earn money enough to manage their living. This day and age, the more high the petrol are, the more exorbritant the standard living are. It goes without saying that worker are able to do a heavy workload than the past. Additionally, a lot of companies which desire the increasing revenue ensnare their employees laboring more than the several time. That is all motivation result in this culprit.
I strongly opine that statemaent is still hapen in working environment that lead to lots of malevolent things. Firts of all, the labours exert on negative impact on their health. They easily suffer from the various heath issue; desperately, eyes problem. If it is slight, they will be Astigmatism, Itchy eyes, dry eyes, etc.. However, in a long time they certainly struggle with Cataract. In addition, harmful affec is happens not only physical health but also metal heath. Meeting the dealine is too much to make the labours be out of control that is leading them easily feel carthatic. They are able to suffer form depression until the working under the pressure about target approached doesn't linger. Futhermore, Health problems are not the most malignat. The best thing impacted is their family. While the worker was working overtime to get the job done on time, the dinner meal with famliy was being missed. Consquesently, the time spending for family is inferior to their workshedules that makes the family member has a distance. Day by day, they don't understand one another; morever, the family's relationships are going to collapse.
When its negative merits are acknowlege, its positive still stay. It takes much time to do the work is still the way to develop the economic. Besides, The competitiveness of bussiness between other companies is still enlarge. At the point, the quality of commerces are still better. Final individuals get more advantages is the customer that is everyone.
To be sum up, more hours is spended in their workplace is extended which still approach certain disruptive impacts.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, if, so, still, while, as to, in addition, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 34.0 13.1623246493 258% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2196.0 1615.20841683 136% => OK
No of words: 434.0 315.596192385 138% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0599078341 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56428161445 4.20363070211 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70166768144 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 261.0 176.041082164 148% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601382488479 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 673.2 506.74238477 133% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 11.0 2.52805611222 435% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 30.0 16.0721442886 187% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.8969432381 49.4020404114 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 73.2 106.682146367 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.4666666667 20.7667163134 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.7 7.06120827912 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 3.4128256513 293% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243518999626 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0455914362531 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0561578297903 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134444685985 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0549838841057 0.056905535591 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.48 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 118.0 78.4519038076 150% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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