Together with the development of human’s life standard, the things people care for also increases. People care about what they eat, what they wear, what they buy, where they live, and the biggest thing they care about is money. In daily conversation, we can easily hear something like how much money people earn or how much they pay for things.
Nowadays, there are too many things that money is in need, such as foods, clothes, medicine and so on. They are all necessary stuffs. Besides, we also have to pay for a great of bills and other fees. Therefore, people always think about do they have enough money to purchase the thing they want. Money have become their biggest problem people care about. So it is not hard to understand why everybody both young and old always talk about money whenever they meet each other.
In one hand, I think this has many advantages. When talking about this problem, people will know who makes more money than us, who has a more comfortable life than us,… Thence, they will have more motivations to endeavor in order to have a better life. Besides, during the conversations, people can learn a lot from the way to spend and save money suitably to running a business,…
However, in the other hand, this trend sometimes leads to some deleterious results. Many people will find the way to show the others that they are prosperous, they have more money, they can purchase fancy products. They look down on other people. This will make the person who talks with them have the feeling of inferiority. Moreover, it is not hard for us to come across people who go to great lengths to themselves better than others. They will buy luxurious things, spend money on everything that make them have a sense of wealth. And how about the result? Of course they will have no money.
In conclusion, I think talk about money in daily conversation is okay. I believe that this trend is a positive development even though there are still some drawbacks.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, hence, however, if, look, moreover, so, still, then, therefore, i think, in conclusion, of course, such as, talking about
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 24.0651302605 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1639.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 347.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.72334293948 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31600926901 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36317213673 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.512968299712 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 497.7 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 5.43587174349 258% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 50.2563947714 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.0476190476 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5238095238 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.47619047619 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.455963248021 0.244688304435 186% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.13835259401 0.084324248473 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0880728822666 0.0667982634062 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.258075313176 0.151304729494 171% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0980737538065 0.056905535591 172% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 13.0946893788 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 50.2224549098 144% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.3001002004 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.8 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.75 8.58950901804 79% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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