In many countries people increasingly talk about money (how much they earn or how much they pay for things in their daily conversations). Why? Is this a positive or negative trend?
As Society develops people can attracting much importance to discussing about income figures and expenses this is due to the desire to learn about reasonable spending and find a job with highest salary and I believe that this tendency would bring negative effects on both businesses and individuals there are two reasons for this propensity to sharing each other about Finance the first factor is that people want to know how other spend on their daily life as a result they can compare with the personal expenditure and learn how to allocate money efficiently especially young people who started Living independently need advice from others to ensure that they are following the right path another reason for this is seekingseeking a better working option with Pros graduates or unemployed people they are often fighting a job with suitable salary with them and they would like to have some advices so they ask their parents friends seniors or colleges to receive some job options related to their department or specialty with reasonable income as a consequence they would not receive salary that under the Professional Knowledge as far as I am concerned this tendency seems to be detrimental for both companies and people firstly people become stressful if they know that friends of colleges have higher income this attributed to peer pressure between human if you anxiety when people around them gain more affluence living standards than them in terms offriends went interviewing with employees the human resources department cannot offer a suitable salary to them seeing the salary shares so much about in the workplace this failing to attract and retain talents who Reserve higher income to sum up the tendency of conversing about in common expenditure results from the wanting to manage Finance effectively and useful advices for working however I think it's impacts on businesses and individuals are disadvantages
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 183, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'with the highest'.
Suggestion: with the highest
...bout reasonable spending and find a job with highest salary and I believe that this tendency...
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Line 1, column 624, Rule ID: GIVE_ADVISE[4]
Message: Did you mean 'advise' (a verb)?
Suggestion: advise
...e who started Living independently need advice from others to ensure that they are fol...
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Line 1, column 1509, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'resources'' or 'resource's'?
Suggestion: resources'; resource's
...t interviewing with employees the human resources department cannot offer a suitable sala...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, so, i think, as a result, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1609.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17363344051 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66851584786 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.559485530547 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 512.1 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 16.0721442886 6% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 311.0 20.2975951904 1532% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.4020404114 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1609.0 106.682146367 1508% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 311.0 20.7667163134 1498% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 69.0 7.06120827912 977% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.262678337138 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.262678337138 0.084324248473 312% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.262678337138 0.151304729494 174% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 158.4 13.0946893788 1210% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -244.19 50.2224549098 -486% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 124.6 11.3001002004 1103% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.19 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 23.23 8.58950901804 270% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 59.0 9.78957915832 603% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 126.4 10.1190380762 1249% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 125.0 10.7795591182 1160% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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