In many countries, people now wear Western clothes (suits, jeans) rather than traditional clothing. Why? Is this a positive or negative development.
A few subjects are as likely to provoke controversy as in many nations, in recent years, people have a proclivity to wear Western garments rather than conventional clothes. There are various reasons for this trend and I personally think it brings both advantages and disadvantages.
On the one hand, there are at least three main reasons can be identified. Firstly, it is no doubt that the notion of modernism in terms of dressing is one of the roots of this trend. Frankly, people find traditional clothes seem to be no longer and suitable, even are outdated. Secondly, with the significant influences of Western cultures through movies and music, young people tend to imitate their public figures and change their style. Finally, there are myriads of transcontinental corporations appeared, in particular, occidental companies which require their staff to wear westerly uniforms, suits or skirts, for example. As a result, making a contribution to reshaping fashion patterns of the indigenous.
On the other hand, this development has both merits and demerits. On the good side, in the age of globalization, it is beneficial for people who adopt this new style such as becoming gradually more integrate into international environments. By contrast, some occidental garments seem too sexy or revealing that are not fitting many national traditions. Besides, people also worry about cultural assimilation among nations. For example, Ao Dai and Ao Ba Ba, conventional clothes in Viet Nam are now rarely wore, exceptionally on special occasions like Tet holidays and other traditional festivals. Therefore, people around the world have to facing the loss of the national identity.
In conclusion, it is clear that there are various reasons for wearing Western clothes in some countries and this tendency brings both negative and positive consequences.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: Ba
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, finally, first, firstly, frankly, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, at least, for example, in conclusion, in particular, no doubt, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1564.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37457044674 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04262107637 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625429553265 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 488.7 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.674350469 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.266666667 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.8666666667 7.06120827912 182% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240294906693 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0649248349222 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0601140319529 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152801858888 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0441243104793 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.3 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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