In the modernizing society, western clothing such as suits or jeans tend to be worn by people in various nations rather than local costumes. I think this change brings all positive and negative aspects.
On the one hand, there are many positive aspects that western clothing brings to our society. Firstly, because of its convenience and flexibility, people wearing these clothes will be highly active in some activities such as study or picnic compared to traditional clothes that are too complicated to wear. Moreover, taking up new trends is a better option of formal attire for business events and it also expresses people's respect and shows their confidence as well. This can help us more easily to get involved in important international affairs such as economic or political events, where formality is required.
On the other hand, in spite of the above mentioned benefits, the prevalence of foreign clothing over the local costume also generates many downsides. Initially, this trend will lead to the loss of culture and tradition. It is undoubted that traditional costumes represent a long history and cultural identity of a nation. However, many people tend to turn away from their traditional attire and they believe that it is sometimes old fashioned. Furthermore, it prevents them from chances to be in touch with their ancestral cultures and traditions, leading to the lack of knowledge of their own history and cultures.
To conclude, the prevalence of western-style dress is the result of the development of globalization progress and this trend has both advantages and disadvantages.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, however, moreover, so, well, i think, such as, in spite of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1353.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26459143969 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88953409017 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.630350194553 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 427.5 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.649410573 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.75 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4166666667 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.33333333333 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.356561347622 0.244688304435 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11000059057 0.084324248473 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0760595207399 0.0667982634062 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.21490143005 0.151304729494 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.085865465052 0.056905535591 151% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.22 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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