In many countries, people now wear western-style dress such as suits and jeans rather than traditional clothing.
Why is this?
Is this a positive or negative development?
These days, in many countries, western-style clothes, for instance jeans, are becoming increasingly popular among people, while traditional clothing is unlikely to be seen. In this essay, I will explain the causes of this this trend in detail and consider its impacts.
As regards the reasons for the development, there are two main ones. To begin with, as Europe countries are usually developed, their cultures would dominate the other regions in the world. As a result, some social standards which originate from the west, including fashion styles, gradually become universal. Thus, suits are widely considered the most formal type of dress, leading to its popularity, especially in workplaces or important events. Furthermore, compared to traditional clothes, western clothes tend to be more convenient and comfortable. For example, sweaters could be worn and washed with ease, and are suitable for a wide range of activities; in contrast, kimono, which is the traditional dress of Japan, requires a great deal of effort to be kept intact, while it could restrict people’s daily activities.
While the discussed reasons may result in an impression that the development is beneficial, there are also the potential negative impacts. Among which, the most significant and concerning one is the disappearance of traditional values. Since clothes might bear with them the cultural and historical meanings, abandoning them would cause a huge loss in terms of national cultural features. Many governments have been aware of the consequences, and come up with measures that attempt to make conventional clothing more common and appealing to people.
All in all, western dresses have been favoured by people all around the world thanks to their convenience, as well as the domination of European cultures. Nevertheless, allthough they offer people wearing them remarkable advantages, they could detrimentally affect the whole local society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, may, nevertheless, so, thus, well, while, as regards, for example, for instance, in contrast, as a result, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1642.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.51006711409 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95291335988 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.651006711409 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 506.7 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 2.10420841683 380% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.5492936004 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.285714286 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2857142857 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0714285714 7.06120827912 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217594559989 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0607633599267 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0475718788837 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124116342644 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.06029111659 0.056905535591 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.68 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.14 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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