In many countries the proportion of older people is steadily increasing. Some think this is good. While other believe this is a problem for a country. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
With the rise in modernization, a man has transformed his life tremendously. He has progressed walking from barefooted in the jungles to take the first step on the moon. Nevertheless, there are some issues which remains irrevocable and as complex as ever.for instance, the given topic asserts that the proportion of old individuals is surged nowadays. It is good or bad for nation? Through this essay, I shall explore the dimensions of this topic with examples and good illustration to shape up my opinion by the end.
On one side, there is an group of people who believe that in many nation, the population of old people are inclined nowadays. According to my perspective, there were beneficial for everyone nation. The old person had been skilled in different field such as business or so on. Additionally, that have seen that dark and shine experience of life. Moreover,These are experienced person and helps to grown- up business of company's. The best epitome of this is everyone company had highered manager director of his own company was being old person. They should have tackle
any critical situation in anytime.
Contrary to this, there is an opposing group of people who reckon that the old people could have bad impact on the country. First and foremost point is the numerous old people were suffer from a few of critical diseases. The government could have provide a ton of medical treatment free facilities for old individuals to health issues.further, In the age 60 year above people do not hard work for development of country.so, that is highly bad effect on nation.A good illustration of this is the Indian army had retired army soldiers of duty after that 45 year older person. Because, they have no able to physically fit for hardworking.
To crown it all, I pen down saying that, weighing the both options; there is no single conclusion still; I take this ground that an effective clap require use of both hands accord to my view therefore undoubt the old people is good for country but, in the era, Everything has double- edged sword but my point of view old people were experiencing and could have moral ethic values but, other hand, they have over burden on governor- agencies which had been expend lot of money free-of-cost pension and medical facility to old people
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, still, therefore, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1912.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 391.0 315.596192385 124% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89002557545 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44676510885 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75360286522 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 220.0 176.041082164 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.562659846547 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 598.5 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 121.593286557 49.4020404114 246% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 112.470588235 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.88235294118 7.06120827912 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225852653556 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0609921159183 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0593829700628 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109826815644 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0626058445591 0.056905535591 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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