A person's worth nowadays seen to be judge according to social status and material possessions .old fashioned values, such as honour, kindness and trust no longer seen important. To what extent agree or disagree?
Today, this argument is true, that ancient cultures qualities does not matter for long ago like; honesty and loveable Whereas, the individual judged to way of social standard and dressing sense as well as expressing inspiration. I agree to this statement, because money and time convenience were major factor in disappear previous morals.
At the first glance, people were investigate to social behavior as well as latest fashion trend whereas, at the previous time, the individual emitting crucial factor such as; honourable and good moral values. Due to this reason, most individual under the effect of achieving higher status in the society . To prefer money is highly effective for people to change their psychology . For instance, the Hindustan time was conducted survey found that in the 21st century 8 out of ten were relocated to self-respect and kindness in the community so that, people show interest to acquire a quite few of economy.
Secondly, in the current situation show that person have been lack of period because, they were busy in the swamped schedule like royal family and celebrity and so on which is also effecting towards encourage money and show self- behaviour for other .Hence, loss a lot of best habits with each other. Crime is good illustration of this is, anyone show selfless to acquire property self relationship
To conclude, no doubt, at the currently, most people are show keen interest to represent their status that's why, a truth is mitigated and soar- up greediness in the world.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, hence, second, secondly, so, well, whereas, for instance, no doubt, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1280.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 250.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6215956821 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.652 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 394.2 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 80.0772088362 49.4020404114 162% => OK
Chars per sentence: 160.0 106.682146367 150% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.25 20.7667163134 150% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.5 7.06120827912 177% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0770425704517 0.244688304435 31% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.032166558071 0.084324248473 38% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0270312505023 0.0667982634062 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0439860441612 0.151304729494 29% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0222194961777 0.056905535591 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.3 13.0946893788 140% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.01 50.2224549098 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.01 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.78 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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