Undoubtedly, advancement in medical science has been proved as a boon for accelerating the life expectancy of people. Owing to this, the burgeoning rates of the senior citizens' population can be observed in most nations. I consider this trend constructive due to its enormous benefits comprising responsible citizens, prosperous livelihood and assistance to youngsters.
Commencing with the most salient reason why it is beneficial for society to have elders, they play a vital role in making a society a better place to live. Since most parents have hectic life schedules, there is no impartment of moral values in young ones unless there are grandparents with them Grandparents eighteen them with every aspect of life whether by setting examples in front of them or verbally describing things. Consequently, it renders society I with not only responsible citizens in the future but also makes them more sensitive towards others. Moreover, attainment of happiness is another positive aspect of having elders in the home. Instead of living life idly, elders tend to involve in minor household works and share responsibilities too, which bestow adults with a relieved and pleasant life.
Another worth considering merit is the wisdom handed down to the youngsters by the elderly. As older people have a plethora of real-life experiences, it often renders solace in seeking advice from older people. For example, retired citizens can adequately guide society's youngsters by sharing their experiences, such as how to overcome the crisis of poverty and what kind of initiatives one should take while setting up goals. Youngsters can also get benefit from the preceding mistakes done by elders. This awareness can be conveyed either by using social networking sites or by forming groups with neighbours. Hence, society can gain a myriad of benefits from older minds.
To conclude, positive aspects of society, including conducive environment of society, pleasure and constant guidance, can be ensured provided that more older citizens are in the country.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, hence, if, moreover, so, while, for example, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1755.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 322.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.45031055901 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91178010984 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.636645962733 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 552.6 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 35.0 20.2975951904 172% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 155.242542216 49.4020404114 314% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 195.0 106.682146367 183% => OK
Words per sentence: 35.7777777778 20.7667163134 172% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.55555555556 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.140721479544 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0600726296295 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0405014098542 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.077723200815 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0185161422361 0.056905535591 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.1 13.0946893788 169% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 27.49 50.2224549098 55% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.1 11.3001002004 160% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.92 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.11 8.58950901804 129% => OK
difficult_words: 117.0 78.4519038076 149% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 29.5 9.78957915832 301% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 16.0 10.1190380762 158% => OK
text_standard: 30.0 10.7795591182 278% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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