In many countries the proportion of older people is steadily increasing. Some think this is good. While other believe this is a problem for s country. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
It is incontrovertible fact that the old age is often associated with wisdom. The ratio of elder people is rising in few nations because of numerous revolutionary invention in the field of medicine and technology. The given topic assert that the proportion of older people is increased rapidly; it is beneficial for the country or not? I shall explore the dimensions of this topic through examples and assertion and shape up with my opinion by the end.
To embark with, there are some people who believe that the rising if old population is not beneficial for the country. The first and foremost is if the old people ratio will be incline it effected the economy condition of the country because the government should spent the lot of money on their. A good illustration is that the government provide all the facility of the old people like pension, discount in public transport and free medical service. However, it effected the development of the country. Secondly, the old people have lot of experience about the work but they have not workforce to keep the economy running and developing of the country without the help of young people whereas, the do not survive in the modern era, because their thinking is different from the young generation.
On the other side, there are plethora of reasons why the grey head are beneficial for the country. The strengthen their view point by claiming that they have many moral values and they provide the better environment for upbringing the children. To epitomize, in this work pace era, every parents busy in their work schedule they do not have time for their children. So, the grandparents take care their kids in better way. Furthermore, they have more knowledge about their cultures and with the help of their the culture is alive in modern era. Last but not least, they have lot of experience about the work rather than the young people as well as they motivate the youth in better way.
At the end of the day, each coin has two aspects. I think, they has some disadvantage of the country so, the government should should take the step against the rising of the old people generation. Moreover, they have a lot of benefits the because old people are the root of their society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, well, whereas, i think, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1857.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 387.0 315.596192385 123% => OK
Chars per words: 4.7984496124 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43534841618 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59748923067 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.475452196382 0.561755894193 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 579.6 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 9.0 2.52805611222 356% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.971185728 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.166666667 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.11111111111 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176072933111 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.059278316801 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0509944745431 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10909912401 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0280418627705 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.56 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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