Nowadays, living far from parents is a ubiquitous phenomenon. According to that, people, especially youngsters opt for independent lifestyle since they started studies or work until they got married. From my perspective, the benefits of this trend completely surpass the opposite sides.
On the one hand, living without family's support have some disadvantages, including raising living cost and unwholesome lifestyle. For the former negative impact, it is indispensable fact that the young who choose freedom have to confront the lack of saving money for emergency cases. Instead of making use of parents' financial sources, youngsters need allocated their budget to meet basic living conditions such as renting price, repairing and maintaining household equipment cost, and other bills related to gas, electricity and water. Besides, lack of control from older generation could be a key factor leading to the increasing in the number of wrong behaviors and the soaring crime rates. Because of insufficient understanding, knowledge and skills, younger people are potential subjects to be took advantage by law-breakers to embark on criminal road.
On the other hand, I strongly believe that the plus points of independent lifestyle completely outweighs the drawbacks for several reasons. Firstly, living far from parents is a good opportunity for the young to practice independence, which is one of the most vital characteristics of a successful person. Due to the lack of support from family's members, young group have to deal with obstacles by themselves, which contributes to shaping people's awareness as well as boosting their confidence in all circumstances. Another outstanding benefit lies in comfort. Because of the generation gap between family's members, youngsters have numerous difficulties in adapting with the lifestyle of the old. Therefore, choosing independent life is considered as an effective measure to live as they dream of.
In conclusion, despite some negative influences on children when deciding to live without parents' support, I contend that the popular trend brings more advantages than disadvantages.
- The chart below shows estimated world illiteracy rates by region and by gender for the year 2000 73
- The following table gives statistics showing the aspects of quality of life in five countries 89
- The workplace nowadays is trying to employ the equal number of females and males Do you think it is a positive or negative trend 78
- The diagram shows the life cycle of the honey bee
- Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems To what extent do you agree or disagree What other measures do you think might be effective 84
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, firstly, if, so, therefore, well, in conclusion, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1810.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 322.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.62111801242 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07217426214 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.630434782609 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 555.3 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.1337595891 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.666666667 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4666666667 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.2 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.276555538519 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0817774873531 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0590851574493 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168549139009 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0729600001486 0.056905535591 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.32 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.12 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 78.4519038076 141% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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