In many countries schools have severe problems with student behavior. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest?
In many countries schools have severe problems with student behavior.
In a myriad of nations, education institutions have to face difficulty with the conduct of students. This essay will suggest a poor parenting style as the root cause of this phenomenon and submit that a public awareness campaign is a viable solution.
The culprit for this is the lack of discipline at home. The rationale behind this is that many parents either do not have time or underestimate how important it is to educate children about the value of manner. Many young people, therefore, act rudely at school, do not want to listen to teachers and rebel against restrictions or rules. According to a recent study from Cambridge University, 1 in 3 students, who come from households with two breadwinners would refuse to follow the code of conduct at school, if they did not agree with it.
It requires no tedious analysis to learn that a rectify to curtail this hindrance is to promote a government-sponsored campaign about the danger of misbehavior at school. This may, in effect, increase public understanding of this alarming situation. As mirrored by a recent campaign by the Vietnamese authority, that teaches kids about the essence of a good manner and this results in a drastic improvement.
Subsequently, weighing all the aforementioned, it can now be safely stated that poor conduct at school results from parental misguidance, however, this can be tackled through educational programs that encourage courtesy in institutions. It is predicted that more and more countries will be forced to take this measure to counter this dilemma.
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1306.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14173228346 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11740427863 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.606299212598 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 405.9 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.1117718646 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.727272727 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0909090909 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.81818181818 7.06120827912 40% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190057856579 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0689403193782 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0287080556856 0.0667982634062 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110186609677 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0370916574486 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.75 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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