Over the past few decades, many countries have witnessed an increasing number in students’ attitudes becoming worse towards schools. This essay will discuss some problems in which there is an increasing number of students behaving negatively towards teachers and schoolmates at school before outlining some viable solutions to mitigate this situation.
To commence with, there are some motives of children being naughty and rebellious at school. Firstly, this tendency is attributed to the lack of consideration of various schools for students. To be specific, many teachers have an inclination towards giving priority to exceptional students having excellent academic performance or even worse, to students possessing wealthy status background. This phenomenon gives rise to many other pupils’ disagreement and resentment due to inequality, especially when it comes to their teachers. Secondly, another motive for this matter is that families do not completely pay attention as well as lend a sympathetic ear on their children. To illustrate, since kids were born, they have been wishing to be solely loved and cared by their parents. However, the only thing that the children receive afterwards is cold looks and communication full of anger and disappointment, which are attributed to the fact that their parents are always busy to work. As a result, this reason is responsible for the higher tension as well as the further distance between parents and kids. Then one day, the value of parents’ words will not exist anymore.
Therefore, some feasible methods should be imposed to resolve the aforementioned matter. First of all, it is imperative for teachers and parents to alter their viewpoint as well as put more emphasis on communicating and comprehending students. For instance, an honest deep conversation after a lesson and at night would be a good counsel for teachers and parents respectively. Consequently, this action greatly contributes to the acknowledgement of children for being concerned and supported by adults. Moreover, another resolution for this issue is that it is necessary for schools to offer students with more opportunities to express their own viewpoints and ego. For instance, headmasters should give students permission to write comments about matters at school on its fanpage. As a result, this action will help schools partly understand and be cautious about various potential problems at school that their students are coping with.
In conclusion, this essay has demonstrated the causes, effects and measures of this matter which is about serious matters between schools and their students.
- Some people think schools should group pupils according to their academic ability but others believe pupils with different abilities should be educated together Discuss both views 84
- In many countries schools have severe problems with students behaviour What do you think are the causes of this What solutions can you suggest 89
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, firstly, however, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, well, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2231.0 1615.20841683 138% => OK
No of words: 406.0 315.596192385 129% => OK
Chars per words: 5.49507389163 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48881294772 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98982416018 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 230.0 176.041082164 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.566502463054 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 667.8 506.74238477 132% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.3087783504 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.421052632 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3684210526 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.21052631579 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171407576995 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.056334798161 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0467214832696 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114417772145 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0317319677503 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.62 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.31 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 119.0 78.4519038076 152% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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