In many countries, a small number of people earn extremely high salaries. Some people believe that this is good for the country, but others think that governments should not allow salaries above a certain level.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
People have different views about whether governments should introduce a
maximum wage. While in some ways it may seem reasonable to allow people
to earn as much as companies are willing to pay, I personally believe that
employee remuneration should be capped at a certain level.
There are various reasons why it might be considered beneficial to allow
people to be paid extremely high salaries. If companies offer excellent pay
packages, they can attract the most talented people in their fields to work for
them. For example, technology companies like Google are able to employ the
best programmers because of the huge sums that they are willing to pay.
Furthermore, these well-paid employees are likely to be highly motivated to
work hard and therefore drive their businesses successfully. In theory, this
should result in a thriving economy and increased tax revenues, which means
that paying high salaries benefits everyone.
However, I agree with those who argue that there should be a maximum wage.
By introducing a limit on earnings, the pay-gap between bosses and employees
can be reduced. Currently, the difference between normal and top salaries is
huge, and this can demotivate workers who feel that the situation is unfair.
With lower executive salaries, it might become feasible to introduce higher
minimum wages, and everybody would be better off. One possible
consequence of greater equality could be that poverty and crime rates fall
because the general population will experience an improved standard of living.
In conclusion, it seems to me that it would be better, on balance, for
governments to set a limit on the wages of the highest earners in society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, may, so, therefore, well, while, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1452.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33823529412 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73828702485 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.636029411765 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 449.1 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.1571698132 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.692307692 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9230769231 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.53846153846 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 23.0 4.38176352705 525% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192771703137 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0673971365222 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0603324234319 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0511872537247 0.151304729494 34% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0491779852008 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.33 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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