Employment career is vitally important to every individual after graduating from the universities. However, the insufficiency of people who is adequate for important jobs appears to be a prevalent phenomenon in many countries. In the following essay, I will elaborate the reasons for this problem and elucidate the appropriate measures for solving the problem.
First and foremost, people often choose the job according to its social status and the amount of salary rather than their own interests. Take doctor for example, some people who engage in practitioner mainly because of massive income and superior status in the society. In such circumstances, people would not fully commit themselves into the work, and therefore unable to have a successful career of working. The possible solution to this serious issue is that people should opt their jobs on the basis of their interests due to the fact that interests could motivate people to make great effort to work.
Even more disturbing, though, is the fact that some essential jobs often provide unsatisfactory treatment for the employees. A salient example of this is the nurse, people who take part in nursery usually get ill-paid and overwork frequently. In such situation, most people tend to become discouraged which unable to inject sufficient passion in the work. A possible approach to this unpalatable scenario is that the government should raise the income and create more content environment for the nurse.
By way of conclusion, though the scenario of shortage of proper people for important job has been prevailing from past decades, there are some practical solutions to remedy it.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, so, therefore, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1398.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31558935361 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8155579031 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.596958174905 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 438.3 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 25.5281707139 49.4020404114 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 116.5 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9166666667 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 7.06120827912 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174225363802 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0628919043326 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0460842409473 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108490551488 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.045196975028 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.42 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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