Plethora of nations facing the problem of find the capable workers for the significant working fields.There are some reasons behind this issue and this will attempt to provide an overview after the elaboration of main negative point and provide the foremost steps which can be produce the good result of this testimany.
Primarily, the first and foremost reasons is that the old workers don not happy to leave there job at the age of there retirement so, how can increase the new vacancies for new jobs? To tackle this problem government should fix the perfect age group where individuals leave there job and settle the new workers at there place. For instance, after the completion of education most of the juveniles find the jobs but sometime spaces for them are not much and they cannot achieve good job.
The second main point is that nowadays rich people show there high status symbol and set there life in the best jobs. Although, they have good expierence or not but with the richness and good link with the political leaders they achieve job easily whereas, talanted people who have best skills, abilities there expierence not showing. So, for the solution authorities should strive to diminish corruption and afterthat find the capable person who have great experience in the working field.
To recapitulate, I intend support my perspective that government should mandatory to fix the limited age of retirement as well as explore the talanted businessman who have brilliant skills, abilities, and also capable for the working field.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 103, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: There
...kers for the significant working fields.There are some reasons behind this issue and ...
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Line 5, column 278, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'have the best'.
Suggestion: have the best
...job easily whereas, talanted people who have best skills, abilities there expierence not ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, so, well, whereas, for instance, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1296.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08235294118 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52414408164 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 176.041082164 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.545098039216 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 399.6 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 60.8172210398 49.4020404114 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 162.0 106.682146367 152% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.875 20.7667163134 153% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.125 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0834217157798 0.244688304435 34% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0373920514714 0.084324248473 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0238181593563 0.0667982634062 36% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0500811328125 0.151304729494 33% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0280794596467 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.4 13.0946893788 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.01 50.2224549098 80% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.78 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.83 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 10.7795591182 176% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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