Segment of individuals conjecture that spare time activities must be a good source of study for the kids,but opponants consider that it is a wastage of time. So, in this essay i will provide an overview after illucidating the main causes behind this testimany because i completely aggree with it.
First of all, now a days children's curiosity become burgeoning towards the leisure activities such as sports, art, many other various activities because they want to achieve every kind of skills in different fields. Furthurmore,instead of study they also get fascinated towards the other physical activities because they want to show their talent in their favourite activities therefore they think that by taking part in extra activities then they can lost their anxiety, burden and they can become rejuvinated.
Throwing a next stone in the same pond, by joining the leisure activities children can also protect them from the awfull habbits such as enough watching TV, addicted of internet usage and aware from the bad company as well because many time when kids spend there leisure time spend isolate and that time they addicted from devastating activities.
To recapitulate, I intend to support my point of view is that leisure activities can be provide a sufficient result to the children because they have an oppurtunity to reveal their talent in their favourite field as well as they can also full fill their interest by following their impressing part of activities.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 106, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , but
...t be a good source of study for the kids,but opponants consider that it is a wastage...
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Line 1, column 178, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...is a wastage of time. So, in this essay i will provide an overview after illucida...
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Line 3, column 15, Rule ID: NOW_A_DAYS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: nowadays
...letely aggree with it. First of all, now a days childrens curiosity become burgeoning t...
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Line 3, column 19, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a day' or simply 'days'?
Suggestion: a day; days
...ly aggree with it. First of all, now a days childrens curiosity become burgeoning t...
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Line 3, column 228, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , instead
... skills in different fields. Furthurmore,instead of study they also get fascinated towar...
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Line 3, column 387, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... in their favourite activities therefore they think that by taking part in extra ...
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Line 3, column 454, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'lose'
Suggestion: lose
... part in extra activities then they can lost their anxiety, burden and they can beco...
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Line 5, column 232, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun time seems to be countable; consider using: 'many times'.
Suggestion: many times
...re from the bad company as well because many time when kids spend there leisure time spen...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, then, therefore, well, kind of, such as, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1243.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 240.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17916666667 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93597934253 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79545451979 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.570833333333 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 394.2 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 40.0 20.2975951904 197% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 78.9282374481 49.4020404114 160% => OK
Chars per sentence: 207.166666667 106.682146367 194% => OK
Words per sentence: 40.0 20.7667163134 193% => OK
Discourse Markers: 15.1666666667 7.06120827912 215% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182393932945 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0941605471689 0.084324248473 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0412478437886 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111471234362 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0237826539074 0.056905535591 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 23.0 13.0946893788 176% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.88 50.2224549098 61% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.9 11.3001002004 167% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.36 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 18.0 10.1190380762 178% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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