Many countries today are experiencing high levels of migration from rural areas to cities What are the causes of this trend and what effects does it have on the existing city dewellers

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Many countries today are experiencing high levels of migration from rural areas to cities. What are the causes of this trend, and what effects does it have on the existing city dewellers ?

Moving from the countries to urban regions has been a popular phenomenon in numerous nations of the world for several years. There are some reasons and impacts on the current local residents which will be discussed in this essay.
First of all, the main reason for the migration of population from remote areas to metropolitan cities is the difficult to find employment. Most of the work in villages is related to agriculture such as food production or animals breeding which have less workforce is needed.
In addition, many people espcially youngers people want to challenge themselves with more advanced and diversified careers. Urban areas where have may high-tech companies are located why is reason they tend to leave their homeland to pursue their dream professions.
Finally, the urban has a higher standard of living than the countryside. For example, there are a number of utilities, including public transportations, entertainments and so on. It's very appropriate for the young generation wants to make a big change to their life. They want to have a better future prospect for the next generation. Metropolis offer a lot of opportunities and have better infrastructure, health care service and education facilities.
There are two consequences from this phenomenon. Firstly, more people coming to the cities will place more pressure on the current infrastructure. Overcrowding and traffic congestion occur from day to day. This can easily be seen in many cities like Bangkok, HoChiMinh and Tokyo. Secondly, more people will result in more competition for the same job. On top of that, the flux of migrants will also cause housing prices to accelerate. That is an inevitable consequence when the demand is becoming greater than the demand.

All of all, migration is an inevitable tendency that required the close collaboration of government, companies and individuals. Living conditions for rural areas should be paid more attention and improved.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 346, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'offers'.
Suggestion: offers
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, as to, for example, in addition, such as, first of all, on top of that

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1656.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.32475884244 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01372123619 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.610932475884 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 518.4 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.842907535 49.4020404114 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 82.8 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.55 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.6 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162847119162 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.043557541034 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0419992339918 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0763404509566 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0333406428248 0.056905535591 59% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.28 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.36 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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