Nowadays, many countries have problem, which is about insufficient respect to older people. There are many reasons, which cause this in society.
In my point of view, the first reason is incorrect education of children. Today, young people do not know even how to speak to older people. Adults have to teach young generation to show respect to elder people. If child will be taugh in the young ages, he or she never forget it. For example, my parents always say to me to concede a place in bus for adults. These kind of few education will provide a good future generation.
The second reason, which is also valuable, is a government, which does not pay attention to the problems of the old generation. For instance, I live in Kazakhstan and we have many people, who participated in the World War II, they are now too old and the way in which they live leaves much to be desired. The government, in my point of view, must help them with living resources. By doing this, it will be respected by people of their country. Furthermore, people will start to show respect to old people also.
Overall, there are many other reasons, which might cause problems of insufficient respect to old people, but in this essay I wrote about the most noticeable of them. The main solve for this problem is to start respect elder people by yourself.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 30, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Nowadays, many countries have problem, which is about insufficient res...
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Line 3, column 271, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[3]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'forgets'.
Suggestion: forgets
...augh in the young ages, he or she never forget it. For example, my parents always say ...
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Line 3, column 361, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'These kinds'?
Suggestion: This kind; These kinds
...e to concede a place in bus for adults. These kind of few education will provide a good fu...
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Line 3, column 375, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun education seems to be countable; consider using: 'few educations'.
Suggestion: few educations
... place in bus for adults. These kind of few education will provide a good future generation. ...
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Line 5, column 506, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...ill start to show respect to old people also. Overall, there are many other reaso...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'furthermore', 'if', 'second', 'so', 'for example', 'for instance', 'kind of']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.227941176471 0.247107183377 92% => OK
Verbs: 0.147058823529 0.155533422707 95% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0955882352941 0.0946595960268 101% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0441176470588 0.0501214627716 88% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0625 0.0437548338989 143% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.102941176471 0.122226691241 84% => OK
Participles: 0.0110294117647 0.0403226058552 27% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.50140874336 2.80594681477 89% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0514705882353 0.0326793684256 158% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0661764705882 0.0861772015684 77% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0220588235294 0.021408717616 103% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0294117647059 0.011925033212 247% => Maybe 'Which' is overused. If other WH_determiners like 'Who, What, Whom, Whose...' are used too in sentences, then there are no issues.
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1338.0 1933.35771543 69% => OK
No of words: 237.0 316.048096192 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.64556962025 6.12580529183 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92362132708 4.20517956788 93% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.26582278481 0.374742101984 71% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.206751054852 0.28420135186 73% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.139240506329 0.203846283523 68% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0970464135021 0.137316102897 71% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50140874336 2.80594681477 89% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 176.037074148 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.556962025316 0.56093040696 99% => OK
Word variations: 53.7757209389 60.7387585426 89% => OK
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0891783567 93% => OK
Sentence length: 15.8 20.7743622355 76% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.4301462467 49.517814964 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.2 127.492653851 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8 20.7743622355 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.666666666667 0.814263465372 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 3.99599198397 125% => OK
Readability: 36.4751054852 49.1944974215 74% => OK
Elegance: 1.34782608696 1.69124875643 80% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.41717447368 0.332605444948 125% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0939029422636 0.102741220458 91% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0741977906644 0.0668466124924 111% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.496664273791 0.534860350844 93% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.153857687448 0.148594505496 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.158354192765 0.134430193775 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0821591605931 0.0742795772207 111% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.331827318091 0.324371583561 102% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.119624587607 0.0638462369009 187% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.311718504629 0.228012699653 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0638697448584 0.058150111329 110% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.68436873747 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.41683366733 117% => OK
Positive topic words: 8.0 5.90881763527 135% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.5751503006 39% => OK
Neutral topic words: 4.0 1.9629258517 204% => OK
Total topic words: 13.0 10.4468937876 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.