After many years, society today has developed more and more. The equality between women and men has become more equal than before. Within recent years, in many countries, women no longer feel the need to get married, because some people believe that women are able to earn their own income. Therefore, they tend to do not require financial security that marriage brings to them. I partly agree with this statement.
Today, women tend to good at many fields, even that belong to men in previous times. It is a huge leap that women can get in this modern life. Women can earn their income base on their talent and their potentiality. In the past, women are considered as a weak side, their responsibilities are staying in the kitchen and taking care of their family. They did not allow to take part in the discussion about the politic, economy, or something that just men can talk about. Nowadays, women can be educated well, they can get a job and pay for their essentials. Therefore, they do not need to rely on the men or the income of their husbands in marriage.
However, even is the best and the strongest woman ever, the one can responsible for their income and get a lot of money. Women have to need the shoulders of a man whenever they feel down in the dumb. Except for the financial problems, the soul of women is weak fundamentally. They will need a man who is stronger than them, the one can comfort women when they feel down, the man also can be the main person in the family and responsible for the heavy burden.
As far as I thought, I believe that women totally can get their own income and take responsibility in their life by themselves. However, in some tough circumstances, women still need a man in their life. It will be easier and more comfortable for them. If women just live alone, they have to be very strong to stay under the pressure of life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 369, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'taking'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'allow' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: taking
...are of their family. They did not allow to take part in the discussion about the politi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, still, therefore, well, except for
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1538.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 340.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.52352941176 5.12529762239 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29407602571 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44765971129 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.491176470588 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 486.9 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.2299599779 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.9 106.682146367 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.85 7.06120827912 40% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.271545336921 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0895041583194 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0807417300115 0.0667982634062 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178275859801 0.151304729494 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0788022702456 0.056905535591 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 13.0946893788 64% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 50.2224549098 142% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.64 12.4159519038 70% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.03 8.58950901804 82% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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