In many countries, woman no longer feel the need to get married. Some people believe that this is because woman are able to earn their own income and therefore do not require the financial security that marriage can bring. To what extent do you agree or disagree.
Marriage is an beautiful relationship between two bodies and families. In the current time of technological advancement, one of the most pressing concerns regarding the given topic that is it necessary for women to get married; either being able to earn their money by yourself? I completely agree with this topic and shall explore the dimensions and assertions of this essay and shape up my opinion by the end.
To begin with, there are numerous reasons why women not ready to get married. The first and foremost reason is education. in the past time, girls were not allowed to study because of domestic violence. Morever, the value of males were more than female due to that one of the earning hand in the home was male therefore, only man had right to go to school and study. In addition to this, the girls parents prefer to marry without being study. However, now, the world has totally been changed and the mentality of people also change. For instance, women are studying and taking more initiative to compete task with men. There is a huge change between past and present world, women is better than boys in every field; either it be educational or professional.
Moving furthur, women do not want to be married as they think that they would lose their freedom. They think that before marriage, they are free from restrictions and free to go easily where they want to go whereas, after being married, they have to follow the rules and regulations of their another home. In spite of this, marriage can put pressure on them to do every work regarding their will. For example, a survey conducted by the university of Delhi reveals that 150 out of 200 women asked that they did not want to marry because their would earn money and another family not wanted them to continue their job so, they neglected to get married.
All in all, I personally believe that it is good for women is self independent and completely all task by yourself in a better way, it is even good but they don't leave traditions and think intellectually about marriage and care about moralities and emotions regardless of materials.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, regarding, so, therefore, whereas, as to, for example, for instance, in addition, in spite of, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 58.0 41.998997996 138% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1747.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 368.0 315.596192385 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.7472826087 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37987740619 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49947862002 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565217391304 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 547.2 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.7204238369 49.4020404114 141% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.1875 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.6875 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.139166470566 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0450567815114 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0417012993103 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0768988256514 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0403983042872 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.57 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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