In many countries woman no longer the need to get married. Some people think that this is because woman are able to earn more income and do not require security a man for being. What extent do you agree or disagree?
Marriage is an institution ordained by god, and a basic building block of decent societies. With the rise in the modernization, a man has transformed his life tremendously. He has progressed from walking bore footed in the jungles to take first step on the moon. Nevertheless, there are some issues which remains irrevocable and as complex as ever. For instance, the given topic asserts that getting married after earning necessary for the women or not ? Through this essay, i shall explore the dimensions of this topic and shape up my opinion by the end.
On one side, there is a group of people who believe that now days woman are more educated and they have earned more money. They easily fulfill their all needs and they do not depend on other persons for their financial needs. However, some women forced by their in-laws for the dowry. In that case, some women suffer from depression, because they do not fulfill their all demands for their law's. For instance, the survey conducted by the defence department, the 75 percent of women file the case in coat against the in-laws for the dowry system. Some committed the suicide. Also, some proportion of the in-laws killed their daughter in law, because they do not fulfill their demands. Some woman feel that they do not have freedom after the marriage.
Contrary to this, there is an opposing group of people who believe that after marriage responsibilities are more as compared to before marriage. Who woman are educated, there expectations level is increase day by day. Moreover, they do not involve in decision making in their in-laws families. The mostly decision is taken by the head of the house. They never like to involve the woman in all matters. Besides, after marriage woman also sacrifices their all dreams, because there are lots of responsibilities after marriage.
In conclusion, as we have seen that there are number of answers to this question. On balance, however, i tend to believe that main reason for this reluctance is woman self sufficiency. They do not fulfill the need to get married. It is even good to an extent because due to that they can leave traditions behind and think more intellectually marriage and care about morailities and emotions regardless of material.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1870.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 381.0 315.596192385 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90813648294 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41805628031 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65880968377 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.51968503937 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 590.4 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 16.0721442886 149% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.1934139988 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.9166666667 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.875 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.75 7.06120827912 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.258121135861 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0739187444925 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0527489573057 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1554500803 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0483408595263 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.9 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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