in many countries women and men are working full-time. It is therefore logical for women and men to share household tasks. To what extend do you agree or disagree?
having a full-time job is a norm for women and men in many countries, this means that they should share house-related jobs with each other equally. It seems that although women are better at managing the house, it is both women and men’s task to do household jobs.
Ancestors believed that it is in the woman’s nature to manage the house and the man should manage the family. This, however, belongs to the past, in that there is no distinction between genders in today’s work environment All men and women attempt to have a tranquil life by working together in order to bring income for the family. Given the fact that women are tend to be weaker than men, it is excessively unbearable for women to both work full-time and take care of the house. Arguably working both in office and home is unacceptable for females.
It appears that man should participate and help the woman in household tasks. For example men should do tasks like, washing the dishes, vacuum the rooms, and pick up children from the school. At first brush, taking part in might seems impossible for men, because women are better at upbringing and managing the house intrinsically, men, however, can learn these tasks by reading books and watching tutorials and implementing them in the house. So in order to survive in this society men and women should share their jobs in home to have the work-life balance.
Rarely can a woman undergo all these difficulties both in home and work. Some may say that it always has been women’s job to do these tasks but in order to have a better life they should contribute with each other. So it clearly is one of the man’s jobs to help her in the home-related tasks.
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Suggestion: Having
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...genders in today's work environment All men and women attempt to have a tran...
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'tended'.
Suggestion: tended
...e family. Given the fact that women are tend to be weaker than men, it is excessivel...
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Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'saith', 'says'.
Suggestion: saith; says
...culties both in home and work. Some may say that it always has been women's jo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, may, so, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1414.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.74496644295 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58178245571 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.503355704698 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 435.6 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.1529720209 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.769230769 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9230769231 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.46153846154 7.06120827912 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.329400129162 0.244688304435 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.126778641609 0.084324248473 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0861636329957 0.0667982634062 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.228282123945 0.151304729494 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0935232714503 0.056905535591 164% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.51 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.59 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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