In many countries women no longer feel the need to get married. Some peoplethat this is because women are able to earn their own income and therefore do not require security a man can bring. To what extent you agree or disagree?
With the rise in mordernization the lifestyle of people have been greatly affected. The have achieved many milestones. However, some issue remain unchallenged and as complex as ever. One such issue here is reluctance of marriage by women. This topic asserts that is self sufficiency, reason behind reluctance of marriage by women? I completely agree with this topic. Through this essay, I shall explore the dimension of this topic with some examples and assertions and shape up my opinion at the end.
To begin with, domestic voilence is the major cause behind my opinion. As, we have seen in developing countries like India women are asked to bring dowry and if they oppose their demand, as a result some are beaten and burnt whereas others are blackmailed for divorce. Though, India is developing but still it is with the mentallity of people that women are considered as maid to do house hold chores and depend on their husband financially as well as mentally, they are not free to make decisions.
Secondly, women now days are highly educated and given equal status in society. They have become financially strong therefore do not find any need to marry because after marriage they will have to sacrifice their dreams which are not supported by their in laws. Moreover, they get burdened by the responsibilties of two families. At the end, it is also believed that expectations ia key factor for reluctance. As many women did not find their "Mr perfect" therefore become overage.
As we have seen there are number of answer to this question. However, I tend to believe that in many nations, female no longer sense the urge to tie a knot. In my opinion, government can implement some laws so that women can think of marring once.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...fect' therefore become overage. As we have seen there are number of answer...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, well, whereas, as a result, as well as, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1457.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90572390572 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67175058695 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.599326599327 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 473.4 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 53.0534321855 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.9444444444 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.88888888889 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24113321067 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0656767405624 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0419920163194 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138680921745 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0185658873723 0.056905535591 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.9 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 9.78957915832 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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