In many countries women no longer feel the need to get married. Some peoplethat this is because women are able to earn their own income and therefore do not require security a man can bring. To what extent you agree or disagree?
With the rise in mordernization the lifestyle of people have been greatly affected. The have achieved many milestones. However, some issue remain unchallenged and as complex as ever. One such issue here is reluctance of marriage by women. This topic asserts that; is self sufficiency, reason behind reluctance of marriage by women? I completely agree with this topic and shall explore the same with some examples and assertions and shape up my opinion at the end.
To begin with, domestic voilence is the major cause behind reluctance. Women are prey to domestic assault, they are forced to follow unnecessary rituals and do "pardha", though many laws are implemented to overcome "pardha system" but there are many regions in India where women face these problems. A recent survey was conducted in India which suggested that there are above 80 percent of the women in India, asked for dowry and if they take any step against this, they are burnt whereas some are blackmailed for divorce. Though, India is developing constantly but still there are some people who consider women as maid to do house hold chores and depend on their husband financially as well as mentally, they are not free to make their own decisions.
Secondly, women now days are highly educated and given equal status in society. They have become financially strong therefore do not find any need to marry, because after marriage they will have to sacrifice their dreams which are not supported by their in laws. Moreover, they get burdened by the responsibilties of their families. It is also believed that expectations is key factor behind the view of mordern women, many women did not find their "Mr perfect" and become overage.
As, we have seen there are number of answer to this question. However, I tend to believe that in many nations, female no longer sense the urge to tie a knot. In my opinion, government can implement some laws so that women can think of marring once.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, well, whereas, as well as, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1661.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 331.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01812688822 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74484226376 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601208459215 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 537.3 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.3145701937 49.4020404114 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.7058823529 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4705882353 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.58823529412 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.248651110116 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0709857072718 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.039225475705 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146754758623 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0237902190748 0.056905535591 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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