In many countries young people have been living far from their parents from the time of studies, work till marriage. Do you think there are more advantages than disadvantages of this trend? What is your opinion?
It is true fact to consider that young people have different view to stay with their parents. Therefore, some people do not like to reside with their family members; hence, they live so far from them till they marry. I assert merits of this trend are more than the demerits, and these will be elaborated in the upcoming paragraphs.
The first and foremost benefit of living far away to persons is that they become more independent because they indulge him in solving all the house chores. Thereby, they able to solve cookery related issues of their life. For example, my friend did not know how to cook food, but when he started living alone, he learnt cooking skills.
Moreover, the second benefit to stay far away from family is that one becomes extrovert by nature thereby reduce stress. For example, when I was living with my family members, not only I was very introvert but also I was in mental stress because I had fewer friends at that time. Since I started residing far from them, now I have so many friends. These are the reasons, I feel living far way from family is very lucrative.
However, some experts profess that this phenomenon has demerit also. They say, when a person stays away from their family, they indulge themselves in unethical activities because only parents can mentor their activities. This can be exemplified, my one best friend when went so far for academic studies, he joined a club of smokers. Now, he is active smoker and is also a patient of asthma.
In the end, although some people say residing far away from family member is not beenefial for young person, I firmly believe this trend has more benefits.
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Suggestion: as well
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, however, if, moreover, second, so, therefore, for example, i feel, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 24.0651302605 183% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1368.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73356401384 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.29469949356 2.80592935109 82% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.570934256055 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 432.0 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 5.43587174349 276% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.8529609774 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.2 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2666666667 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.8 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.258961060058 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0883010164794 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0583228410911 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154748402891 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.066095860544 0.056905535591 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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