Many crimes are often related to the consumption of alcohol. Some people think that the best way to reduce crime rate is to ban alcohol. Do you think this is an effective way/measure against crime? What other solutions can you suggest?
Alcohol is thought to be the cause behind plenty of offences, presently; therefore the most influential method implemented is prohibition of alcoholic beverage in order to decline crime rate, some people believe. However, personally I am not a proponent of this standpoint for some reason.
First of all, utilization of alcohol do not appear the major factor to different offences. In fact plenitude of wrongdoings and felonies such as serial murder, organized crime or white collar crime are derived from conscious people who are not drunk and able to conceive nefarious actions towards society. Such beverage plays a minor role in these assortments of offences. Additionally, many countries and regions, developed or developing, have deemed liquor as culture and tradition such as Germany, France and Vietnam, where their residents booze regularly. If the authorities enforce the prohibition of beers or wines, the repercussion will be immense to the society and economy in a detrimental manner.
As regards feasible measures, new type of retribution should be introduced, deployed and maintained uniformly and strictly. Government should outlaw some stringent rules whose punishment are not loosened or disregarded by rising drastically not only fine but also length of incarceration. With this sort of regulation, when people consider drinking, they would agonize and seek the most appropriate way and behaviour for punishment avoidance legally and wisely. As a matter of fact, there is not such efficient solution to shackle people who drink intentionally and lack consciousness, then do the harm to other people and their community.
To conclude, liquor consumption cannot be restricted because of its ineffectiveness and impossibility. Nonetheless, people can modify the negative consequences by devise more stringent policies encouraging and enforcing people to comply.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, nonetheless, so, then, therefore, as regards, in fact, sort of, such as, as a matter of fact, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1600.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.65371024735 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14900669727 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.660777385159 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 512.1 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.6253872928 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.076923077 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7692307692 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5384615385 7.06120827912 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 8.67935871743 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197955278198 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0542338633893 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0508561695837 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109200786334 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0434995186569 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 50.2224549098 66% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.49 12.4159519038 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.48 8.58950901804 122% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 78.4519038076 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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