One of the most conspicuous trends of today's world is a colossal upsurge in the number of people believing that many lawbreakers stop to commit crime after they have been charged or punished and there are some offenders who continue to commit crime even they have been punished . There is a wide range of factors that accounts for why this is happening. In my opinion, this situation can be remedied by providing some effective measures are taken.
To commence with, there are deluge of reasons of this soaring concerns. The most preponderant one is unemployment . To elaborate it, joblessness can lead people to turn to crime due to financial pressure and also lack of structure in their daily lives . It cannot only contribute to fearfull atmosphere in society, but also leads to numerous other catastrophic impacts in various fields. Besides, lack of parantel guidance is another major culprit . To expalain it, young people can easily turn to crime from peer pressure because their parents do not teach them the consiquences after commiting crime. For instance the study results published by government of Australia in March 2014 and April 2016 clearly indicate that unemployment and lack of parental guidance is the biggest reason in commiting crime even after they got punishments. Needless to say, all these demerits have far reaching impacts on society.
Steps to deal with this problem are many. The most effective ones are not remote and complicated, but practicable and accessible. The primary one lies in the fact that higher authorities had better provide jobs to the youth of nation by implementing rigorous rules and regulations. Moreover, the government had better organise awareness camps to educate parents to teach their children about crime in their initial life. This is because at that age they have fertile mind. So, they can easily acquire knowledge to differenciate between what is right or what is wrong. Only when convergent efforts are taken by all sectors, this problem can be overcome.
To conclude, dealing with continue committing crime by individuals even after they have been punished is one of the most prevalent issue that face almost all countires of the world today. Although this problem can be alleviated by collective efforts of individuals and government, its potential impact is too great to ignore.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, moreover, so, for instance, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 60.0 41.998997996 143% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1961.0 1615.20841683 121% => OK
No of words: 381.0 315.596192385 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1469816273 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41805628031 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73109194549 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 176.041082164 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55905511811 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 620.1 506.74238477 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.9309898193 49.4020404114 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.05 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.05 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.25 7.06120827912 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 14.0 3.9879759519 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.442508869763 0.244688304435 181% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101777245633 0.084324248473 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.116124945009 0.0667982634062 174% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.28853608452 0.151304729494 191% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.150868602871 0.056905535591 265% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 78.4519038076 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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