Many customs and traditional behaviours are no longer required in the modern society and therefore they are not worth keeping To what extent do you agree or disagree

Essay topics:

Many customs and traditional behaviours are no longer required in the modern society and therefore they are not worth keeping. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Undoubtedly, customs and traditional behaviours are an indispensable part of humankind. Although some people think that activities are not necessary for this current era, I firmly oppose this statement because without those activities no one can strengthen the relationship and can not make people happier.

One of the greatest customs is that respect elder people because they are plays an important role in both family and society. When people respect each other, which will enhance the bonding between more stronger. Moreover, prayer also an inevitable thing among people because when people do this, it expresses gratitude to the Gods and Goddesses and consequently the devotee is feel more relaxed and also can maintain a strong relationship with their loved ones. For instance, in India, which itself have different forms of custom such as, variety of festivals, ethnic wear, dance forms and religious customs so people really feel some satisfaction once involve it.

Another justification is that modern world is think that they do not necessary to follow any traditional behaviours, but it always upholding the nations identity significantly. In fact, traditional art forms like music, dance and drama are unavoidable in many society even these days. This is attributed to majority of people certainly find some sort of revenue and happiness when practising it. Also, for example, in India, believe that a joint family can often provide tremendous joy and happy, whereas the nuclear family is not as jovial as the former. Therefore, it is proven that these traditional practices play a pivotal role in both family and society than the latest life style.

To conclude, a number of traditional culture and related customs are not acceptable among new generation and they are not following many of this too. However, I strongly believe that these are much essential to learn moral values and can learn how to live in this fast-paced world.

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Average: 6.9 (16 votes)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, however, if, moreover, really, so, then, therefore, whereas, for example, for instance, in fact, sort of, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1651.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29166666667 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73058112991 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.580128205128 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 524.7 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.729418353 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.0 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6153846154 7.06120827912 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.137084428381 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0552111673224 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0529002241481 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0846577735708 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0250847040729 0.056905535591 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.7 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.23 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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