Many developed counties there is a problems with declining quality of air and water from the both tion uses and emitting the industries and constriction . discus the both points
Development leads to the destruction of natural resources like water and air. Now a days, rapid growth of industrialization and contraction are decreasing the quality of water and air. Pollution is effecting the stream of water and air through industrial waste’s completely accept it. Pollution is not an ignoble problem by imposing new laws by government can control the situation of declivity of water and air quality.
Deliberately we are increasing the rang and number for of industries and heavy constriction like skyscrapers are leading us to words development but at the same time an inborn problem rise due to the result of development. In the process of upgrading society, we are not recognizing the of pollution. Now a days in the part of industrialization some companies under medical, synthetic plastic and paint manufacture sectors are establishing their factories and manufacture unit at river banks. Companies are utilizing river water for their productivity uses and emitting the chemical waste into the river and physical waste is going to burn in atmosphere which causes air pollution on the other hand constriction waste and dust my kill moisture in air and causes health problems to the society. An indeed situation which have a solution in the hand of mankind and authority by following some rules and regulation.
Government should bring some new rules and regulations for imposing on chemical and constriction companies. Chemical waste must processed up to affecting condition to air and then dump in an underutilized free space. Which is very far from the cities. burning of chemical waste must abounded. constriction should be covered with dust repellent nets from this no more dust for constriction space can not have a chance to enter into atmosphere. And result to no air pollution.
With this solution there is a chance to avoided duckling quality of air and water
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, so, then, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 10.4138276553 202% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 25.0 8.3376753507 300% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1597.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20195439739 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09907080151 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.514657980456 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 504.0 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.1352840451 49.4020404114 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.8125 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1875 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 7.06120827912 28% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229288157812 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0745393532062 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0561744622625 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153854649618 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0423861834128 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.