Many people believe that social networking sites have a huge impact on both individual and society , to what extent do you agree and disagree.
Social networking sites are occupied the creativity space in people and society. Now a days , social networking sites has changed their way of work and it is going occupy the hole time of people in this situation some people are believing social networking sites are giving a negative wave on people and society. In my perspective I completely agree with this usage of social networking sites and social media shows effect on people health, creativity and time.
In this modern days, people are utilizing social networking sites for getting new contacts, comfort and mobility. This factors lead to increase the population who are addicted to social networking sites. However there by using social networking sites lead to give a chance for people to waste their working time. Not only working time but also have a chance to loss their voluble creativity in regular users . Day by day regular users are is neglecting book reading, writing books and arts because of the utility of social networking sites. On the other hand hours and hours of time spending in front of social media and networking sites leads society to wards health problems like eye site, migraine and heart problems. They are lot more backdrops that effects mankind .
Day by day, people are creating new interest like making relationships with new people and unknown people. Moreover social networking sites becoming a new platform to these people. This kind of steps increased a lot in short time. Which , leads people to face legal issues by interacting with anti social elements through social media accidentally. In this scenario international e comers sites are also increased and showing drastic effect on countries economic growth.
By considering the above evidence I conclude social networking sites shows a lot of negative shades on people and societ.
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| 2019-08-22 | Adithya999 | 61 | view |
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, moreover, so, in short, kind of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1533.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14429530201 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58129733213 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.51677852349 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 486.9 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.411252797 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.8125 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.625 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.375 7.06120827912 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.272056061389 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107328866472 0.084324248473 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0711264081048 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189550547815 0.151304729494 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0582095863348 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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