Many developing countries are currently expanding their tourist industries. Why is this case? Is it a positive or negative development?
In the modern society, tourist industries are currently improved and expanded by a large number of developing countries, which has been a concern to the general public. In my opinion, this phenomenon exerts both positive and negative effects to many aspects of life. In this essay, I will also discuss key causes leading to this trend.
One of the most significant causes of this trend is that tourism is the best way to develop countries to boost their economic growth and enhance residents’ living standard. Specifically, tourism appears to be the hottest industry in the world as it attracts thousands of people coming to visit the attractions; hence, helping to make profit through services provided by this industries. Moreover, expanding the tourist industries also encourages more people to have employment in those areas.
It is undeniable that improving tourist industries is a positive development. It includes rehabilitating more places of interest, providing better services about accommodation, restaurants, tours and travels, etc. Therefore, these changes surely appeal international visitors, which cause the whole economy and local residents to make profits and increase the final income. Another reason for my argument is that expanding tourism helps to raise the popularity of national images. Inevitably, a large number of beautiful pictures will be sent and spread on the Internet to promote the countries’ beauty and attract tourists from all path of life.
On the other hand, many developing countries which are expanding tourism are also considered to be a negative development. Specifically, such minor changes in tourist attractions can also put heavy pressure on residents who are in their vicinity. Local residents may have to change their lifestyle to keep up with the pace of tourist attraction, thus, discouraging them from following traditional ways of living. Besides, expanding tourist industries means less space for other activities and industries such as farming, industrial areas, etc.
In conclusion, tourism is expanding as a result of its importance to the economy of the developing countries. I totally believe that it is both a positive and negative development. It not only encourages the countries to develop but also demonstrates the national images. However, it also exerts negative effects such as pressure on local residents and erases the traditional lifestyles.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, hence, however, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, thus, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2062.0 1615.20841683 128% => OK
No of words: 372.0 315.596192385 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.54301075269 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39173103935 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06427559894 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.534946236559 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 656.1 506.74238477 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.9937135355 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.526315789 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5789473684 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.63157894737 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.330691832493 0.244688304435 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0984097622518 0.084324248473 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.068499477334 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.19407895954 0.151304729494 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0665061127159 0.056905535591 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.85 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.12 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 78.4519038076 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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