It is obvious that everybody always have to deal to deal with numerous situations in lives. However, they cannot prevent these problems from confronting them such as moments when they have to do unsatisfactory jobs or lack of money, etc. In these unfavorable situations, some critics claim that the best solution is to accept them, whereas others argue that we should try and improve such situations. In my opinion, I prefer tackling the issues to accepting them. In this essay, I will elaborate two sides of this debate.
On the one hand, it is often argued that we had better accept aforementioned situations, rather than being always insisting on getting out of them as it may exert negative effects to individuals. Specifically, quitting an unsatisfactory job does not often help you find a better one but let you become an unemployed person. Moreover, having such great desire for having a great deal of money to shake off poverty can cause the innocent to engage in criminal activities such as theft or murder. As a result, we are convinced to go with these bad situations if we have no ability to get rid of them by positive method.
On the other hand, opponents claim that trying to improve such difficulties is much better. According to empirical research and practical knowledge, improvements and innovations are contributing factors to success in the modern society. During the arduous journey of overcoming obstacles, we develop different skills such as logical thinking, efforts, perseverance, etc. Besides, finding ways to improve situations also prevents people from being self- satisfied with their current life.
In conclusion, there are several arguments about what to do when problems confront people. While a number of people argue that we ought to accept them as a better way to avoid negative effects such as committing crimes, being unemployed, etc., others believe that tackling difficulties is a more favorable solution, which leads people to enhance their kills and become less satisfied with them. In my opinion, I totally agree with the second argument because being afraid of risks and accepting bad situations cannot facilitate anyone greater understanding and success in both personal life and career.
- Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. 89
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 42, Rule ID: PHRASE_REPETITION[1]
Message: This phrase is duplicated. You should probably leave only 'to deal'.
Suggestion: to deal
...t is obvious that everybody always have to deal to deal with numerous situations in lives. Howe...
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Line 1, column 369, Rule ID: TRY_AND[1]
Message: "Try and" is common in colloquial speech, but "'try to'" is recommended for writing.
Suggestion: try to
...em, whereas others argue that we should try and improve such situations. In my opinion,...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, if, may, moreover, second, so, whereas, while, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1882.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 362.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19889502762 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36191444098 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83462567433 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.593922651934 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 585.0 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.5817453168 49.4020404114 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.625 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.625 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0625 7.06120827912 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.30919400819 0.244688304435 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0905798109141 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0839268890473 0.0667982634062 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182847382896 0.151304729494 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0419014724949 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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