In many developing countries there is a problem with declining quality of air and water both from industry and construction. What measures could be taken to prevent this?
In the 20th century, development and growth in the area of industries and construction at its peak and due to this the pollution in the air and water is rising. People can use different definitive methods for reducing this pollution and increase the quality of air and water.
Firstly, the demands of people are rising, into fulfilling these demands industries and construction plays a significant role. The more production industry generates more amount of wastage which is harmful to the environment are there. The quality of air and water is decreasing on account of releasing waste chemicals into the air and water as a part of dumping process. These harmful chemicals reacts with air and water, these reactions makes air unbreathable and water un drinkable. On the contrary, rise of construction industry reduces the land for living creatures. The ratio of cities to the jungle is rising dramatically. Construction of cities had done mostly on the banks of rivers, so increasing population makes rivers more polluted. Furthermore, the amount of trees are lesser compare to jungle in the cities, so the amount of purified air is very little.
Now, for prevention of these effects on air and water there are so many different types of measures we can use. One certified method of reducing pollution generating from industries is recycle and reuse. The harmful waste materials which are releasing in the air can be reuse in some other industry. For example, the fly-ash is the by product of burner, this fly-ash can be use for making cement and concrete. For better quality of water the dumping chemicals can be made soften by reacting it with other chemicals. On the other hand, in developing cities by harvesting more and more amount of trees can purify more air and reduce its pollution. The prevention of river pollution can only be happen if people don't throw garbage in it.
To make this essay conclude, air and water are essential for living life. If we pollute these things than we have to suffer life threatening consequences. For a better quality of air and water we must use these preventing measures.
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Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...nd water are essential for living life. If we pollute these things than we have to...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, if, so, for example, on the contrary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1768.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 356.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96629213483 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34372677135 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74188384681 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.469101123596 0.561755894193 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 562.5 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.783187339 49.4020404114 48% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 88.4 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.2 7.06120827912 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 3.4128256513 293% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.274650797284 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0895015411965 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0587309892906 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182842289603 0.151304729494 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.035949623336 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.25 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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