Many different countries have most shops and products as the same. Some people consider it positive development, whereas other consider it negative development.
Discuss both the views and give your opinion.
In this modern era, the development in the industrial and service sectors has increased to a large extent. However, some people assert that it is a positive development, while others believe it is negative growth. In the upcoming paragraphs, I will discuss both views of an argument.
There are numerous positive reasons. Firstly, the import and export cost can be saved, which could be useful for the development of the nation. Secondly, the goods are available in their own country, so they do not have to spend huge sums of money on different products. For instance, New Zealand and Australia provide goods and services of their own country, which is beneficial for their economy.
There are ample negative aspects. To begin with, if the imports and exports of goods and services are not there in the country, then it may be possible that other countries do not help in the war or financial crisis. Moreover, if wants are not satisfied, then due to brain drain the migration to other countries rise. Furthermore, the people may buy goods at higher prize to fulfil their needs, so the difference between affluence and lower class increases. To exemplify, the countries such as India prohibited the import and export of products from other countries, which resulted in disastrously in their
economic development.
To conclude, there are pros and cons of both the view of an argument. In my opinion, I believe that having products and shops of own country is beneficial to certain extent.
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, while, for instance, such as, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1250.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 250.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69608308477 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.568 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 383.4 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.3141796082 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.2857142857 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8571428571 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2142857143 7.06120827912 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22574263055 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0754188730613 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0457924278444 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116190393539 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0797988413554 0.056905535591 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.42 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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