Many government think that economic progress is their most important goal. some people , however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country.
People have different views about how governments should measure their country's progress. while economic progress is of course essential, i agree with those who believe that other measures of progress are just as important.
there are some reasons why economic growth has become a concern of the government. Firstly, a healthy economy creates more job opportunities, improves the quality of employment and increases the salaries for all citizens. Secondly, high wages satisfy employees and encourage them to work better, which leads to an increase in the country's income. The turnover of capital also leads to an increase in the country's exports and the promotion of its global ranking. For example, China, with it's rapid economic growth and global reach, has succeeded in becoming the first economic power in Asia and then the first in the world. During the pandemic, it became Europe's largest economic partner, surpassing the United States. This economic prosperity has also made the political role of this country more decisive in the world.
However, I would argue that other factors are important as economic as. In particular we should consider the area of social justice, human rights, social health and democracy itself. For example, with the development of industries, modern societies have been faced with more environmental pollution. These pollutions directly affect the health of societies. Rising disease rated reduce employee productivity and disrupt the economic cycle. On the other hand, societies need experts and educated people for development, which emphasized the importance of educating people. Happiness is another point to consider. The governments must prepare the ground for the happiness, well-being and comfort of their nations.
In conclusion, the economy is obviously a key marker of a country's success, but social, environmental and health criteria are equally significant.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Europes the largest
...e world. During the pandemic, it became Europes largest economic partner, surpassing the United...
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...ealth criteria are equally significant.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, well, while, for example, in conclusion, in particular, of course, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1617.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.53767123288 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78136803801 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.616438356164 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 507.6 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.2133735978 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.8333333333 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2222222222 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.44444444444 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.25983482656 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0676646470564 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0621429443866 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143619675443 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0729034417664 0.056905535591 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.56 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.78 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.