Many governments think that economic development in important goal. Others think that other aspects are equally important for the development of country. discuss both the views and give your opinion.
In current scenario, local authority is to be considered as an consequential part of any nation. Plethora of bureaucrats urge that the financial development is the most essential aim for the progress of country. However, others reckon that for the betterment of the nation not only economic aspect,but also other aspects such as culture and tradition, education, and health so on are important. In my opinion, all prospects play an indispensable role for the growth of nation, which are going to be articulated in trailed paragraphs.
At the outset monitory development is necessary for the country. Firstly, government can keep up their relationship with other country's authorities with the help of money. To quote an example, local regulators of India can ameliorate their import and export business, by the dint of they develop their country's economic progress which engender to make new industrial construction, and for the public that stands as an epitome. such several examples are present around the globe. Secondly, the country who is well developed by the economic, never fall in debt or any other losses.
On the other side, different aspects like, education and health are also vital for the nation. If country has pots of money, but never use in health services and studies than that rupees are worthless. Moreover, devoid of education, people become illiterate, and unemployment ratio is also burgeoning, which obstruct the development of country. To cite an example, rural areas of India, who still follow the conventional method of teaching. Owing to this India is still considering as a developing country as compare to others, which can be considered as a paragon.
To sum up, for the wholesome growth of country government should understand the values of every aspects not only financial values.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, well, such as, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1531.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24315068493 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90198253391 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.571917808219 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 481.5 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.3566139931 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.066666667 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4666666667 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.86666666667 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.238252967872 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0768584730269 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0586007589122 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139257383235 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0488522467459 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.28 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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