The touchstone of a satisfacatory country includes prosperous economy, attainable public welfare and other attributes. An numerous government insist that the only important factor contributing to a prosperous country; whereas, some people think that other characters also facilitate the nurish of the country where people live in with sincere happiness. Personally, I conceive a country that people proud of requires improvements on whole aspects.
Economic prospery is a critical criteria of a welthy country, but it is not the only foundation of a great country. Evidently, the progress on economy benefits the residents, which renders a society of dominent middle class. However, people also need improvements of other facet. for example the right to vote. In China, people enjoy an outstanding economy in the world but still were not empowered with the voting right.
Furthermore, other progress, like public welfare, also enforce a better country thant the country that only abundant in commadeties. Public welfare wield a significant influence on the ensurence of the unemployed and retired people. With easy access to public welfare, people still can live a decent life with out job. Take Australia for example, Australians live a leisure life due to the complete and detailed public welfare.
From my perspective of view, I believe all the aspects concerning a country are imperative for the attention of the government. For instance, political participation, high-standarded education and fair environment for business are also the standards of a country that people love and proud of . I reject the intention of merely pursuit the progress of economy. Additionally, I insist that a country must improve all the spheres that lead to an advanced country.
To recapitulate, I think the government should not merely improve the economy, but also should enhance the satisfaction of other areas that relates to the happiness of citizens.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 120, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'A' instead of 'An' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: A
...le public welfare and other attributes. An numerous government insist that the onl...
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Line 3, column 33, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'criterion'?
Suggestion: criterion
...cts. Economic prospery is a critical criteria of a welthy country, but it is not the ...
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Line 3, column 281, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: For
... also need improvements of other facet. for example the right to vote. In China, pe...
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Line 5, column 306, Rule ID: WITH_OUT[1]
Message: This word is usually written together. Did you mean 'without'?
Suggestion: without
...re, people still can live a decent life with out job. Take Australia for example, Austra...
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Line 7, column 293, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... a country that people love and proud of . I reject the intention of merely pursui...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, so, still, whereas, for example, for instance, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1651.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.46688741722 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04556987548 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.539735099338 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 531.9 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.2817458616 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.1176470588 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7647058824 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.35294117647 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163638275233 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0497080596578 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0380342706452 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0890591714245 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0208008908284 0.056905535591 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.3 50.2224549098 74% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.15 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.45 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.