many governments think economic progress is their most important goal. some people, however, some other types of progress are equally important for a country.
discuss both these views and give your opinion.
According to Governments all around the world, economic prosperity is considered as the apex of goals. While some people believe, in addition to economic progress, development in other sectors of the nation should be given a equal importance. This essay aims to examine reasons and arguments favouring both perspectives.
Developed nations of this contemporary era were caterogized mainly by its economic prosperity. On the one hand, government’s consider economy as an indicator of the people’s welfare. Thus, majority of developing countries draft annual plans which mainly focus on improving the countries economy. For instance, multitude of supportive schemes are introduced such as relieving taxes for buisness, low taxes on exports, sanctioning generous loans for opening a new business which focus on inland manufacturing or to buy a house/car and even aids in student loans. By these initiatives government’s plan on improving the general living conditions of its people.
On the other hand,some people claim that the government should follow a holistic growth and development plan which might benefit all sectors equally. A good example of such is, China economy was based on its agriculture in the beginning of the 20th century, politician implemented many laws which led to rapid growth of industries, advancements in health care, schools and universities offering high quality education happened in span of few decades. Thus it contributed to the overall growth of the economy. Hence, progression aimed in all sectors of the society shall be the most successful path, that will benefit the people in long run.
In conclusion, From my point of view, although, economic growth brings good for some classes of the society, equal emphasis on healthcare, education, environment and other sectors can alleviate greater half of the society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider using the plural form here: 'governments'.
Suggestion: governments
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'countries'' or 'country's'?
Suggestion: countries'; country's
...ans which mainly focus on improving the countries economy. For instance, multitude of sup...
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...eneral living conditions of its people. On the other hand,some people claim that...
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...cation happened in span of few decades. Thus it contributed to the overall growth of...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, so, thus, while, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1575.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.50699300699 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02272878943 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.632867132867 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 492.3 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 71.9897264202 49.4020404114 146% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.153846154 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.46153846154 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209391641106 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0662218897685 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.054263887687 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126319067023 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.043212209484 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.68 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.03 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.