Economic progress is vital for any country. Countries which are economically developed have a strong position on global platform. However, I am of the opinion, that along with economic advancement a country should also ensure that it develops in other sectors such as education, agriculture and healthcare, to truly standout as progressed country.
There is no doubt that economic development of a country brings many benefits to its citizens. Firstly, a stronger economy ensures that the standard of living of people is raised. People have higher incomes and are able to secure much more than just basic needs. Secondly, residents of developed countries have better opportunities to earn their living in their native place. This reduces the rate of migration to other parts of the world. Thus, a higher financial position of any country leads to prosperity of its population.
However, an increased financial power has to be accompanied with equally better development of other sectors, so that the country becomes self-sustaining. With this regard, the first sector, I feel, that needs development is Education. A higher standard of education will enable a country to produce a greater quality of skilled workforce. As a result, it will have to be less reliant on foreign immigrants to push its industrial and job sector. Another sector that needs further progress is agriculture. A robust agriculture sector will aid the country to be self-sufficient in its food production and reduce the burden of import. Lastly, a country cannot maintain its economic status if most of its workforce remains ill. Therefore, an increased attention to healthcare facilities will allow its citizen to be healthy enough to contribute to its progress.
To conclude, while economic development can help put a country on global map. But this development will not be maintained unless it is also inclusive of advancement in other areas such as education, agriculture and healthcare.
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- “Fatherhood ought to be emphasized as much as motherhood”. The idea that women are solely responsible for deciding whether or not to have babies leads on to the idea that they are also responsible for bringing the children up.-Syerapke- (rewrite) 73
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, lastly, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, while, as to, i feel, no doubt, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1661.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.32371794872 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01683958607 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.551282051282 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 529.2 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.1764952993 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.4210526316 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4210526316 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.31578947368 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.129864022799 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0463584505028 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0558813148733 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0886799510232 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.061319317442 0.056905535591 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.28 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.09 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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