Economic growth seems to be an increasingly concern for every government and but there is an argument that other types of goals are equally important as economy. In my perspective, I agree with the second point.
Economically developed society is undoubtedly beneficial for the material life of its citizens. It is impossible to be independent without money in terms of clothing, housing, eating and transportation in the modern world. It is mean that the citizens’ happiness of life, which is dominated by the support rate of government is controlled by economic progress, so it is reasonable for governments to focus on economic goal rather than other responsibilities which is should be taken by governments. In addition, the cognition that the economic growth is rather important in terms of other public services such as education and health care for the reason that money is the base.
Conversely, some people hold the opinion that government should considerate other obligations as equally important as economy. Firstly, there is no denying that money affects every aspect of our lives, whereas, it is not the key solution to the problems lies every family. For example, the wealthy people who have enough money to get a high quality of life are not always possess happiness. Secondly, spiritual needs today are become increasingly crucial part of life which means that the rising wealth is no longer the only goal of people. Thirdly, only growth in both cultural and economic can be the country increases their international influence.
To some up, I am into the opinion that there are some other progresses are equally important as economy. Money does not mean the whole things for individuals.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: You used an adverb ('increasingly') instead an adjective, or a noun ('concern') instead of another adjective.
Economic growth seems to be an increasingly concern for every government and but there is a...
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Line 3, column 470, Rule ID: IS_SHOULD[1]
Message: Did you mean 'it'?
Suggestion: it
...ather than other responsibilities which is should be taken by governments. In addi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, conversely, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, whereas, for example, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1442.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18705035971 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94726171863 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.546762589928 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 463.5 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.3930626477 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.923076923 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3846153846 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.304298345859 0.244688304435 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100203400839 0.084324248473 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.097531413673 0.0667982634062 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.201253777047 0.151304729494 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0432566471854 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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