In recent times, there is a controversy about the role of the economy in the development of the country. Some people argue that the advert of the economy is always the crucial key objectives which governments need to pay the most attention, while others believe that it had better motivate parallelly economic activities with other domains. Despite some obvious benefits from economic sector, I strongly agree with the ladder opinion.
First of all, it is undoubted to affirm that economic advances play an indispensable role in the wealth of each nation. The first reason worth mentioning is that a strong economy can help a country earn much money to invest and accelerate the other domains. In other words, economic practices are the basement to provide capital for the construction of infrastructure as well as for technological research activities. In addition, improving standard living is the second advantage which the development of economy brings to residents because a competitive market probably leads to the diversification of goods and create more employment. Therefore, positive economic changes can increase income not only for the public area but also for the domestic area.
On the other hand, beyond putting much emphasis on the national economy, authorities also should take some other sectors into consideration. It is obvious that the progress of economy has to be based on the improvement of related sectors. For example, Vietnamese government, in recent years, has focused on the education which would contribute to educating more and more high-qualified employees, thus stimulate the competitiveness of the national economy. Besides, the sustainable development of each nation needs to be due to the combination of different areas. If countries only intend to build many factories with aim to boost the economy without taking into account of adverse effects on the environment, their next generations will surely be victims of the pollution and incurable diseases. Moreover, governments also must predict and have long-lasting solutions to deal with social problems such as the poor-rich gap or the increase in crime rate under the impacts of the economic advert.
In conclusion, although the investment for boosting the national economy is an aspect that government always need to concentrate on, I believe that authorities cannot afford to underestimate the relevant issues like the education and the environment to make sure that the country develops in a maintainable way.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider replacing "in a maintainable way" with adverb for "maintainable"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
... to make sure that the country develops in a maintainable way.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, if, moreover, second, so, therefore, thus, well, while, as for, as to, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as well as, first of all, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 41.998997996 143% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 8.3376753507 240% => Less nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2121.0 1615.20841683 131% => OK
No of words: 392.0 315.596192385 124% => OK
Chars per words: 5.41071428571 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44960558625 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02787854271 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 226.0 176.041082164 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576530612245 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 684.9 506.74238477 135% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 63.3948473195 49.4020404114 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.4 106.682146367 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.1333333333 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.8 7.06120827912 195% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.137228164712 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.045365264985 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0319286155346 0.0667982634062 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0819854961717 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0346531225261 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.39 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.56 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 115.0 78.4519038076 147% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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