Nowadays, myraid of governments believe that economic progress is their important desire. Whereas, rest of people believe that other kinds of progress are equally needed to a nation. I think government should equally focus on other types of progress such as education, hospitality and transportation for overall development. Both sides of this debate will be analysed in this essay, before farming a reasoned conclusion is drawn.
First and foremost, authorities believe that the important goal of them is economic progress of their country because it is important for a nation to have a high economic rate. If government works on economic progress of a country then it will be easy to work with other nation and do business with another countries. That is possible when the both countries have a simmiliar interest on lucrative progress. Moreover, if the authorities work more on economic progress then it leads to the overall development of the country.
On the flip side, some people think government should focus on other types of progress as well. Firstly, they should work on education system in their country because it is beneficial for overall development of a country. To exemplify if the individuals are more educated then they work hard with the logic so it gives the positive effects on economy of the country. Furthermore, authorities also think about hospitality as well as transportation. Government should try to provide the comfortable lifestyle to the citizens so as a result it will lead to high economy progress.
To recapitulate, i think government must give equal importance to other kind of progress as well. I personally believe, if the authorities work on all type progress then it will lead to the overall development of a nation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, if, moreover, so, then, well, whereas, i think, kind of, such as, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1480.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15679442509 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97680087789 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 176.041082164 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.449477351916 0.561755894193 80% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 473.4 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.0128173535 49.4020404114 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 98.6666666667 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1333333333 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.26666666667 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.428977313138 0.244688304435 175% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.161257404441 0.084324248473 191% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.116441616195 0.0667982634062 174% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.291271092516 0.151304729494 193% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0457906454607 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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