In the last decades, automation has exerted both positive and negative impacts in every field in astounding ways. These days, many household activities in homes can be accomplished by the machines. I think the devices, which become the paramount blessings of modern technology, have offered people substantial benefits than the drawbacks. This essay will support my opinion with relevant examples.
On the one hand, the significant health issues are the dominant shortcomings of solely leaning on appliances for all domestic actions. Using washing machines, which are incredibly swift, folks are naturally seduced to devote spare times to submerge on the internet. As online networks are evidently addictive owing to the infinite roots of pure entertainment, many people grow extremely lazy, subjecting to obesity, cataract and sleeping disorder in the course of time. Next, the majority of folks lack great creativity because they are bound to depend on automation, which has proved highly convenient and efficient, allowing individuals a lot of free time. With the consideration of copious hours, a person would distinctly engross him to the virtual online world and be less likely to involve in social and extracurricular activities that could be seriously detrimental to his all round development.
On the other hand, i strongly believe that the advantages readily prevail the weaknesses because of the following two reasons. Firstly, household machines like microwave ovens save time as it can prepare foods in a fraction of seconds, compared to the conventional cooking. And while cooking meals, more nutrients, which are the leading roots of vitamins and minerals that remain the essential building blocks of human cells, are preserved. Secondly, washing machines, which are the accepted apparatus in every day lives, can considerably lighten the heavy work loads of humans. If women washed clothes by hands, they would have to exhaust sustained physical efforts. Conversely, not only would equipment eliminate individual's exertions but also the machine could save precious time, which could be spent on helping their children's assignments.
In conclusion, presumably, major gains such as ample opportunities, conserved supplements and energies outweigh the difficulties.
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Essay evaluation report
flaws:
two reasons in the second paragraph are somehow similar. we may give other reasons like: machinery creates unemployment because one machine can take the place of several men.
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 7.0 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 16 15
No. of Words: 345 350
No. of Characters: 1888 1500
No. of Different Words: 233 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.31 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.472 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.849 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 145 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 124 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 89 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 57 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 21.562 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 7.088 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.5 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.28 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.489 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.03 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 503, Rule ID: ANINFOR_EVERY_DAY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'in everyday'?
Suggestion: in everyday
...hines, which are the accepted apparatus in every day lives, can considerably lighten the hea...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, conversely, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, while, i think, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1943.0 1615.20841683 120% => OK
No of words: 345.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.63188405797 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3097767484 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94145635892 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 232.0 176.041082164 132% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.672463768116 0.561755894193 120% => OK
syllable_count: 604.8 506.74238477 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.2306588499 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.4375 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5625 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.625 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.141659408665 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0416753458289 0.084324248473 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0665649498146 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0731629482945 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0529508836877 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 50.2224549098 66% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.37 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.58 8.58950901804 123% => OK
difficult_words: 129.0 78.4519038076 164% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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