There's a famous saying that, the grass always seems greener on the other side of the river. Although National museums and historical places are deeply linked with the local people's existence, it often visited by the people coming from outside rather than the locals themselves. This essay will discuss the possible reasons of this negligence and also suggest few ideas to help gain their attention.
It is quite common in many countries that, the national people are not quite interested about visiting the local museums and historical landmarks. One of the main reasons i find that, people have become more materialistic rather than intellectual. They only consider knowledge to be beneficial when it relates to any materialistic gain. As a result the knowledge of past has become irrelevant to them. They are only concerned about what we have achieved now ignoring the fact how we have achieved it. For example, in our country we often see people celebrating the independence day but when asked they don't even know the history behind it. Another possible reason could be the administrative approach. It seems that the authorities often promote these national monuments and historical places outside the country in order to have more tourists. While the locals often remain unnoticed.
How to get people's attention? Well, the first thing to be done is to educate our children. We have to make sure that they not only memorizes but also understands the historical background of their own country. Because if they are not emotionally attached to their history, they will often loose their interest in it. Moreover, there should be events and activities held focusing the museums and historical places that will require local peoples engagement. This will establish some sort of attachment between them and grow their interest gradually.
In conclusion, there are several reasons affecting the cause why local people do not value their historical sites and it often seems intellectual. If we can make people especially our children aware of the historical backgrounds and their importance, slowly but hopefully we will be able to reestablish the much necessary attachment.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, so, well, while, as to, for example, in conclusion, sort of, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 24.0651302605 183% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1833.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 349.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25214899713 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32221490584 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73484857367 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.547277936963 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 577.8 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.787147603 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.65 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.45 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.2 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.333469147858 0.244688304435 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0934474192513 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0940093801287 0.0667982634062 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.207600781457 0.151304729494 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0312978402725 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.87 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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