Many museum and historical sites are mainly visited by tourists but not local people why is this the case and what can be done to attract more local people to visit places?
museums and historical sites are seeing a rise in the number of foreign tourists, while locals rarely choose these places as a visit destination. this is because they are too familiar and boring with the local residents, and having intriguing events could be considered as a solution to attract more local visitors.
The role and function of these historical sites should be an interesting, attractive and impressive tourist attractions, while often most local people find it too boring. people claim that nothing changes or differ from when they were a child up to present. The objects exhibited are associated with local daily life, therefore, they are thought to be normal and nothing new for locals to explore. Moreover, these historical places offer so much educational content that people get bored as they read and listen to too much information. A recent research concluded that 71% of average people refusing to visit museums complained that these sites should be designed for entertainment purpose rather than for education.
however, local attention would be brought back to historical sites if those who run these places could create more interactive activities. they could establish contests in which people can participate to examine their knowledge and to absorb useful new information, also, they could celebrate some talk shows where they could employ a university professor or an expert in history field as tourist guides. therefore, they could delivery their passion and knowledge to tourists. this means that these active activities would stimulate tourist’s curiosities since people tend to be attracted to something strange and unusual. And the number of local visitors would increase a result.
In conclusion, although people nowadays tend to be more interested in exploring museums and historical sites coming from other culture than their own since they opine that these place are too boring to visit. however, having more history contests and talk shows could encourage more locals to get there effectively.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, while, as to, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1734.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 320.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.41875 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70759925949 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.546875 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 543.6 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.8957388045 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.857142857 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8571428571 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.07142857143 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.382160122708 0.244688304435 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.137292575618 0.084324248473 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0709647112001 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.264707026305 0.151304729494 175% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0453503584828 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.17 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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